Friday, April 23, 2010

update

1 comments:

Tres Swygert said...

This update I like out of the recent ones you posted.

I don't think you need the black stroke behind "Futura" to where it creates a white bottom for the word. Becomes more distracting, you want it to have more attention than the rest of the elements that are being transformed or placed differently.

Also keep this in mind Jamall, less is more in graphic design. We're both illustrators wanting to add a lot of things...but we need to know where to draw the line, and where things need to be taken out...in other words...quit puttin' more ingredients in the soup!! D: Let the soup tell you how it should be...not you tellin' it. ;)